Artist & Computer Programmer
Let them know who you are and why should the person reading this care?
For example, I'm a computer specialist, I build this website using Umbraco CMS as the foundation! Once you got them past the heading and grabbed their attention, let them know about your goals. I would say, I'm interested in learning more about Blender. I want to find an internship or meetup to challenge myself. Im a hard worker, fast learner. Utilizing Blender after work for personal projects. looking to gain experience to break my professional beginner status in my 3D world! Then you can stick an Ad on the right of the page or somewhere in between to bring in money. Then discuss, something about where you came from, I can say that I had grown from using WordPress, Dreamweaver (yep lol), Bootstrap and Blender & Maya Autodesk.
You could also make a simple list:
You can ask them to click on your Ad (:P) or at least not disable your Ads. It keeps the site running smoothly :)
Because I'm an artist and it's cool.
Please see more of my works here: http://goo.gl/g9Q5MU
I shell leave you with these small tips, good luck with the about page!